Ch 8 pg 5

posted 12th Sep 2017, 8:30 AM

Ch 8 pg 5
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12th Sep 2017, 8:30 AM

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12th Sep 2017, 10:05 PM

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The astral/magic world has a very cyberpunk feel to it -- like how computer hacking in the future was imagined in the 1980s in Tron, Snow Crash, and Shadowrun. The dark thing that Inessa has been grabbed by is like how a virus or defensive program was imagined to be. From a modern perspective it's absurd (but fun), and here it creates a real retro-magitech otherworldly vibe. I like it!

(Dialog in first panel should read: "You're in the uppercity..." Dialog in the last panel is 100% accurate.)

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19th Sep 2017, 10:21 AM

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