Ch 8 pg 13

posted 7th Nov 2017, 11:43 AM

Ch 8 pg 13
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7th Nov 2017, 11:43 AM

R. Burnett

Ooooooh Inessa its not very nice to call out Hunters!

Hope you guys all had a great holiday! We are planning some fun new things coming up hopefully in the next few weeks. Soooo stayed tuned!!

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7th Nov 2017, 11:19 PM

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He sparkles! And smolders! And even has a lensflare in his eye! Clearly he's a creepy Twilight vampire infesting the cathedral, and needs to be exterminated with extreme prejudice.

(A couple of suggested fixes for this page:)
p4: He's -> His
p6: premise -> premises

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8th Nov 2017, 8:37 PM

R. Burnett

Joseph: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

XD You'll understand why Joseph thought that was hysterical by the end of this chapter XD

And thanks! I'll update it as soon as I can!

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