Ch 11 Pg 4

posted 30th Apr 2019, 7:46 AM

Ch 11 Pg 4
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30th Apr 2019, 7:46 AM

R. Burnett

Ember pulled Inessa out of her head and back to the real world! I guess if the tree is over powering your sense of magic, its gotta help to go and see it right?

I'm feeling very extra colorful this chapter! Whats your favorite neon color?

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30th Apr 2019, 8:34 PM

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The way the shirt logo arrow is pointing at Inessa's left hand in p1 makes me think Miss Sticky Fingers swiped the tickets while Inessa was distracted. Maybe she just steals things reflexively to keep in practice?

I think neon purple is the best (the star on Ember's shirt is particularly cool). It looks very cyberpunk, like in the hilariously over-the-top game Far Cry 3: Blood Dragon (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=av5pqJaIeCk).

Oh and I particularly like the background detail on the artwork in the background of p3.

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2nd May 2019, 9:52 PM

R. Burnett

Purple is a good one ^-^

And boy howdy that was OVERLY DRAMATIC
REX POWER COLT.

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