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posted 24th May 2016, 3:55 PM

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24th May 2016, 3:55 PM

R. Burnett

O_o; hopefully this page isn't to jarring. I might edit that third to last panel at some point. I think I picked the wrong angle. But I do love some of the up close panels on Joseph and Natalia's face. :D

.... also sometimes I feel really awful when I draw Joseph's face so nice and clean, then I have to destroy it with those scars. Makes me cry sometimes for the baby ;-;

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24th May 2016, 9:17 PM

crowbar

I knew you couldn't stay away from the Mustang for too long!

(3rd to last panel angle looks fine for me. For transition, maybe add something in the panel background (garage ceiling, lights, etc.) to make it look more natural?)

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1st Jun 2016, 4:12 PM

R. Burnett

I can never stay away from the mustang o-o

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